Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 02/09/14
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Excerpt: A Woman Of Note / Linear Lynn
As Lynn leaned back she also became aware of where my eyes were. Before I could register embarrassment she leaned back and stretched on the sofa like a cat making both her erect nipples very evident through her light blue striped button down shirt. My eyes were not going anywhere now.
Lynn shimmied her shoulders and upper torso around a bit for final effect and said, “I don’t know what feels better. The fabric of my shirt rubbing against my breasts or your eyes glued to them.” The smile she flashed me after that is a thrill I will hold dear forever.
The blouse was open. Now so was the invite
Days and Symes 
Love the open blouse invitational : )
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I thought it seemed sweet and subtle. Well, maybe not so subtle, but sweet none the less. Thanks for stopping by.
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Yeah, agreed on the open blouse/ open invitation. Nicely done. 🙂
One thing I noticed. Though I’m not the greatest on punctuation, Pete, I think there’s at least one missing comma in this sentence: :”Before I could register embarrassment she leaned back and stretched on the sofa like a cat making both her erect nipples very evident through her light blue striped button down shirt.” I think it should follow the word ‘cat’. 🙂
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I must have been distracted by the open blouse. 🙂 Thanks for the input.
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Well she’s not shy! Great visual snippet…
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Thank you. Certainly not shy. As I wrote her I would say I discovered she was more of a go getter.
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I like that the smile is what he holds dear. A nice touch.
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You caught me. It is a fiction from the heart. Thanks.
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Sounds like she knows what she wants and is going after it.
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But should she be aware of the ever present, be careful what you wish for…? We all learn that one the hard way I think.
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Yes, definitely a distracting lady, but sweet fits too. Thanks for sharing!!
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