Weekend Writing Warriors 02/09/14

Weekend Writing Warriors / #8sunday / 02/09/14

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Excerpt: A Woman Of Note / Linear Lynn

     As Lynn leaned back she also became aware of where my eyes were. Before I could register embarrassment she leaned back and stretched on the sofa like a cat making both her erect nipples very evident through her light blue striped button down shirt. My eyes were not going anywhere now.
     Lynn shimmied her shoulders and upper torso around a bit for final effect and said, “I don’t know what feels better. The fabric of my shirt rubbing against my breasts or your eyes glued to them.” The smile she flashed me after that is a thrill I will hold dear forever.
     The blouse was open. Now so was the invite

Weekend Writing Warriors 02/09/14

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Author: Pete Symes

Purveyor of paralogical compliance to verbally mediated reality, artisanal smut, with a pinch of full time flâneur tossed in to taste.

11 thoughts on “Weekend Writing Warriors 02/09/14”

  1. Yeah, agreed on the open blouse/ open invitation. Nicely done. 🙂

    One thing I noticed. Though I’m not the greatest on punctuation, Pete, I think there’s at least one missing comma in this sentence: :”Before I could register embarrassment she leaned back and stretched on the sofa like a cat making both her erect nipples very evident through her light blue striped button down shirt.” I think it should follow the word ‘cat’. 🙂

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